FLASHBACK: EXT. AN ESTATE
Midday, high angle shot to see the whole estate as a whole in one
shot.
VOICE OVER OF AYDEN:
My name is Ayden. I’m 15 years old.
My
mum has cancer and my dad doesn’t want anything
to
do with us.
I
got to get this money.
I
got to take care of my mum.
Time
to man up, even if that means I gotta
risk
my life.
FLASHBACK: EXT.
STREET
Ayden and his friend are both in
their uniform and wearing a backpack making their way to school. One wearing a
jacket without being zipped up fully so can see the tie.
FLASHBACK: EXT.
STREET
2 gangsters approach Ayden and
his friend. No dialogue, one gangster pulls out a blue bag and makes a
convincing face whereas the friend is looking scared. Ayden shakes his head and
the gangster shrugs his shoulders.
FLASHBACK: INT.
ROOM, ON A BED
Ayden kisses a hand which has nail
polish on it so audience can
identify it’s a woman. Hand looks quite aged.
FLASHBACK: INT.
HOSPITAL
A close-up of the sign ‘Intensive care’.
FLASHBACK: INT.
HOSPITAL
Tracking shot of Ayden walking
out of the hospital.
EXT.
IN A PARK. GRAFFITI ON WALL BEHIND
The 4 gangsters are standing
about and laughing, making jokes with each other with their hoods or caps on
whilst in tracksuits and trainers and some have gloves on. Ayden comes from
behind them.
AYDEN
Where’s
Elijah?
The 4 gangsters turn around and
instantly recognise Ayden. One of them walks towards Ayden.
GANGSTER 1
Yoo
Ayden, what you saying g?
Everything
good yeh?
AYDEN
Ayy,
nuttin g. Listen, I want to do this
ting
with you lot. I need some money to pay
for
my mum’s treatment.
Gangster 1 isn’t Elijah but
agrees to give Ayden the job.
GANGSTER 1
Here
fam. Don’t let me down.
I’ma
tell Elijah you came by.
AYDEN
Safe
bro.
Gangster 1 gives Ayden a blue bag.
INT. IN A BLOCK
OF FLATS
High angle shot of Ayden running
down the staircase in his jacket and backpack.
EXT. ESTATE,
OUTSIDE HIS BLOCK
A point of view shot of Ayden’s
sight when he steps foot out of his block-early in the morning. Title
“Problematic” appears on top of shot.
EXT. OUTSIDE THE
SHOP (ROOSTERS)
Ayden meets his friend outside
the corner shop. They ‘spud’ each other.
INT. INSIDE THE
SHOP(ROOSTERS)
They are at the till and the friend thinks they’re paying
separately for the products.
AYDEN
Don’t
watch fam, I got
you.
I’m making that real
paper
now.
Ayden lightly slaps his friend’s bottom as a joke, which signifies their friendship.
AYDEN
AND FRIEND START LAUGHING
Ayden’s phone rings as the cashier gives their change, incoming call from Elijah.
EXT. LEAVING THE
SHOP
Ayden answers his phone as he
leaves the shop, his friend isn’t beside him, he’s busy collecting the
change/food.
AYDEN (Phone call)
Yo
g, what’s good?
ELIJAH
Listen,
come buck me in
20
mins at the spot. Don’t be telling
anybody
though.
Ayden puts the phone in his pocket whilst his friend approaches him.
FRIEND
Who
was it?
AYDEN
Elijah.
Listen I’ll catch you in a bit.
FRIEND
Ayt.
The friend slaps Ayden’s bottom as he turns around. Ayden walks off with
a smile and shakes his head.
EXT. STREET
Long shot of Ayden walking down
the street walking into the alley/subway. Looks over his shoulder to assure
nobody is watching him.
Elijah walks towards him. Point
of view shot from Ayden.
Elijah and Ayden ‘spud’ each other.
ELIJAH (Whilst doing a head nod)
Come.
EXT. STREET
Ayden opens the car door.
Ayden and Elijah are in the car
listening to rap music.
Ayden is texting some girls on
his phone whilst Elijah nods his head
to the music.
EXT. IN A PARK.
GRAFFITI BEHIND
The female gangster pulls a suspicious face.
FEMALE GANGSTER
Something
is dodgy with that
Ayden
boy I swear.
EXT. IN THE CAR
Point of view from Ayden looking
at Elijah.
SHOT-REVERSE-SHOT
ELIJAH
I’m
impressed with you. Been
putting
in that work.
Shot of Ayden smiling, showing his teeth.
Shot of Elijah’s response.
ELIJAH
Relax.
A shot from the front facing them
both whilst they are laughing.
An over the shoulder shot over Ayden which captures Elijah whilst they have
their dialogue.
ELIJAH
You ever had a girlfriend?
Over the shoulder shot over Eljah which captures Ayden whilst they
have their dialogue.
AYDEN
Nah, I aint
about that life, you?
An over the shoulder shot on Ayden which captures Elijah whilst they
have their dialogue.
Elijah
Nah same, aint
got time for them, you get me
Ayden looks towards Elijah, nods his head, gives a small cunning
smile and winks at him.
An over the shoulder shot on Ayden which captures Elijah whilst they
have their dialogue.
ELIJAH
Bruv what dyou
think you’re doing?
Close-up shot of Elijah’s face giving Ayden a dirty look and then
looks the other way. Ayden then slowly moves his hand onto Elijah’s and tries
to hold it. Elijah quickly moves his hand away and repeats himself.
ELIJAH
Bruv, I said
what dyou think you’re doing?
AYDEN
Nuttin g nuttin
Elijah carries on driving until they reach their destination.
(long-shot of them in the car) Theres no dialogue at this moment as things are
awkward due to Ayden touching Elijah’s hand.
Close-up of Ayden’s foot stepping out the car. They both get out the car
in a deprived estate.
Elijah walks away from Ayden discretely (medium-shot) Ayden looks
back and finds himself alone (close-up of his face)
AYDEN
Ayo Elijah where
you at??
Silence. Ayden walks on slowly and finds the group of gangsters
around the corner. He sees them with harsh facial expressions portrayed on
their face.
Long –shot of the group of gangsters
GANGSTER
1
Yo Ayden come
here now!
GANGSTER
2
Grab him
AYDEN
What have I
done?
Close-up of Ayden’s face. He realises the gangsters are there to beat
him up and so runs away.
FEMALE
GANGSTER
He’s running
away! Come let’s get him
Long-shot of the gangsters chasing Ayden and grab hold of him. They
chuck him on the floor. Gangster 1 grabs hold of his hoodie and throws a punch
in the camera. Black out.
END
FLASHBACK: EXT. AN ESTATE
My name is Ayden. I’m 15 years old.
identify it’s a woman. Hand looks quite aged.
Ayden’s phone rings as the cashier gives their change, incoming call from Elijah.
An over the shoulder shot over Ayden which captures Elijah whilst they have their dialogue.
You ever had a girlfriend?
Long –shot of the group of gangsters
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