Monday 10 November 2014

preliminary dialogue

Dialogue-
INT- BEDROOM
Shrin asleep in her bedroom and then wakes up to make her way towards the stairs.
INT-STAIRS/ HALLWAY
Walks across the corridor and down the stairs, towards the kitchen
INT- KICTHEN
Pulls out milk from the fridge, cereal & bowl from the cupboard, phone is lighting up in the back however she is oblivious to it, unintentionally
Eats her breakfast casually, literally in her own world, starts conversation with imaginary person not in shot
Traccking shot
(Left- right)Protagonist:
‘Hmph’
Pause
(midway-right-left, as hand appears in shot)Protagonist:
‘uh uh no no, *tap hand* gotta get your own!’

(pause at protagonist) Imaginary:
‘ah no don’t be like that, come on Ash, I’m starving’
*SRS*- O.T.S pro looking at no-one
Tracking
(left-right) Protagonist:
‘*giggles* you’re so lazy! They’re right there!’

pause

(nobody in seat, right-left)Protagonist:
‘*scoffs* I’m lazy!?  No no no no, what!? ______ I wake up every morning to cook and clean and-and you? You never help, you’re good as dead sometimes… Sorry _____, I’m just so —‘
*SRS*- O.T.S Pro speaking to imaginary person now visible in shot*

Tracking
(right-left)Imaginary now in shot:
‘Look how about… how about we check out that new place round the block for—‘

^(left-right midway) *door bell* pause, silence

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