Friday 10 October 2014

feedback and learner response

WWW: Good advert analyses - in the 50 Cent advert particularly you make some relevant, insightful

points.

EBI: Overall, your blog is a little worrying - a lot seems unfinished or carelessly presented. Your

Institution presentation doesn't include the Powerpoint OR the WWW/EBIs that you were to write

up based on your own reflections (and my feedback). Media language isn't highlighted. A lot to

improve on... One quick win would be to use paragraphs in your analysis. It will force you to write in

more depth and detail, helping you to reach higher grades.

LR: Reflect on your first month of AS Media. What is your strongest piece of work so far? What is

your weakest? What specific skills or knowledge do you need to develop over the rest of the course?

my strongest piece of work so has been on lighting and mise en scene as i have expressed the picture in a variety of ways, my weakest piece of work so far,

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